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Taking a Smoke Break

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The burning embers flash before her eyes
Another fight with good 'ol Dad
He swears his incompetence is a lie
As he rages on again
The nicotine high fills her mind
As she misses the condolences of an old friend
The cigarette butt says good-bye
She prays the night to cloak her as she goes back in
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Hollieollieo's avatar
Very nice.  Really gives an emotional visual, one can feel a form of what is going on in the poem.